Was to have lunch today with JoAnn, but she fell ill so we're rescheduled for Wednesday. I've got a call out to John, to see if I can't get together with him for lunch as well.

JoAnn gave me notes on my Crossing Jordan, which she generally liked. I have one logic flaw I need to fix, which is tied up in the crux of the crime. It'll need some work, but I don't think it'll need an extensive rewrite. She liked the improvements, but wants the absolute best script possible. I have the feeling that if I asked her to send it out now she would, but she knows I can pull off an even better writing sample that she could send out with enthusiasm. Keyboard, here we come!