Cathy Buburuz of _Champagne Shivers_ took the time to read "Snared" (formerly "Into the Parlor" and "Tracker" before that). She said it was a good story and had three suggestions for improvement. I incorporated two of the three, but I have to think about whether I agree with the third suggestion. Ms. Buburuz is easily the most constructive editor I've run across in the story submission process.

I started a new story, tentatively titled "The Finger," and I'm really not sure where it's going at this point. (Ah, puns.)

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