As I said earlier, I've been posting some writing-related stuff over in my LiveJournal, mostly because more writers seem to have LJs, and as a result, they'd be more likely to read it than here. I'll keep adding announcements, good news, and tidbits from my life here, of course.

So... just thought I'd point out to folks what I'm working on with the revisions to Sixteen Miles. Basically, I've been working on the opening paragraphs, which are of course the key to ANY good novel.

So check out my first version, and then compare that to my revised version.

I think I'm getting close... Thoughts and input are always welcome! Later....