Well, that seems to have worked. Tiga Belas is now a complete first draft. Go me.

Of course the last scene is way the hell too long, but that's what first drafts are for. That's also probably one reason why I was having trouble writing it. My screenwriting instructor says I resist writing things down until they're perfect in my head, and I have to cop to that, I guess.

But anyway, it's done. Now I can go on to some other project and come back to this one when it's fresh, and so on and so forth. Tomorrow, something new.